Nano Woes

[arabwel]

So..... I believe I have hit a block whent it comets to Juan and Dante. I just havbe no fucking idea where to go t from that last bit*le sigh*


So... I am asking ytou, my dear readers, what do YOU think I should do? I need ideas *sigh*

Comments

[order_of_chaos]

Chaos: *offers ideas*

Jean: *snarls* You WILL behave yourself, boy.
Dante: Fucking make me. *tries to buck Jean off, with side-effects*
Both: *gasp*
Dante: *eyes go wide and he repeats the movement*
Jean: *Hands tighten bruisingly on Dante's wrists* FREEZE.
Dante: *freezes, staring up at him*


Dante: Please Daddy, please fuck me, Jean please, need you....
Jean: Shut up. *kisses brutally, because hands are still pinning Dante's wrists*

***

Jean: *lays a hand over the place where he hit Dante* I'm sorry, mijo.
Dante: *Leans into it despite bruising* No. *blushes* I liked it.
Jean: You shouldn't.
Dante: No?

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

... *copypastes*

Got any babies to sapare? :D

[order_of_chaos]

*transfigures aztec gold coin into human form*
Sure do! Why, are you getting hungry?

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Oh, something like that. Babiesgo so well woith brains and pasta, you know...

[order_of_chaos]

They do! *munches on baby-limb*

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Want some BBQ sauce?

[order_of_chaos]

Does it look like blood?

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

A little.

[order_of_chaos]

*grins* hand it over, then.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

*hands you the BBQ sauce* Want some brains, too? they go well with babies. As does pasta.

[order_of_chaos]

I have brains. *blinks* I have pasta, too.
Any serving suggestions?

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Well, you broil the brains carefully with some gharlic and maybe a little red wine, and the pasta should be cooked al dente...

but I have no idea about the wine :(

[order_of_chaos]

I shall improvise with the wine, then - and that sounds truly delicious :)

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Do tell how the wine thing goes :)

[aurora100.livejournal.com]

I like Juan's intensity, but not the angry violence toward Dante. I think that if you start their relationship like Juan/Antonin it might be history repeating itself.

Maybe having Juan stop, calm down and then come back to Dante later would work better. I'm a fan of the psychological f-uped-ness between Dante and Juan vs. the utter physical brutality between Juan and Antonin. I would rather see controled violence in sex with Dante than uncontroled reactions. At least for their first encounter.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

That is a very good point.... I don't think that there is much chance for history repeating itself because, welll... one of the things that Juan/Antonin relationship ios very characteristic about is the lack of affection - friends, yes, very good ones, and fucking like rabid bunnoies, buit thrre could never be anything even remotely resembling cuddling...

although I am quite sure that if I do have Juan stopping and trying to withdraw, Dante's abandoment issues would definitely come to play.

Argh *headdesk*

*is still conflicted*

THanks for your input :)

[aurora100.livejournal.com]

just go with it. I'm sure it will be great whatever you decide to do.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

thanks.... I thinK I have something plotted out, thanks to OOC and ZK, but I don't know where the boys wil take me...

[feather_qwill]

Hmm . . . Juan fucks the brains out of Dante and then regrets it. Dante is angry but very, very horny, so he alternates between seducing an unwilling Juan into hot, violent sex, and being sullen and sulky.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

... damn, I like thgat idea.... but I already managed to gobble something up ffrom some commentfests elsewhere....

*hugggles*

[feather_qwill]

Ah, well. Such are the sorrow of life.

*snuggles*

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

*nuzzles*

OI am really tempted byuy your idea but.. it would be, well, too angsty I think: I ewant to play out the Daddy/Boy relationshop more than the fact that th ther eis a lot of trough angry sex...

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

So...with all these suggestions...

when's the next bit?
/whine

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Working on it!

I already have one POV down, now I am working on Dante begging to get fucked again and afyter that, well... i am going to neeed Amber and Antonin, too, to round up the part. (Unless you REALLY want to see the sexxoz boys...

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Mmmm. I'd be happy to see it in smaller bits. It'll keep me from going insane while I do my French and finish up my 2000 words for the day *stabs Dallas*

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

All right, I will finish Dante off and post part 10A in, um, well, not idea how soon but it should be e soonish!

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

yay! *dances about like a thing that dances about*

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

*glomps*

I am trying to gewt the usual 5Kin today, as usual, so there should be another part after the one that i post... soon.. sometime later :D