I read AMM now (damn, I have not the umlauts on my keyboard!) and I liked it a lot - the only thing I was a little unsure about was the ending. It seems horribly unfair that poor Anna should have to suffer horrible pain when the other virgins deflowered over the course of the fic got away so comparatively lightly. I'd have rather seen that final scene be unrealistically perfect, than have all that buildup only to cringe so much that I nearly had to look away.
But apart from that I loved it and I am glad you did the other pairings the way you did, too. *love*
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Date: 2006-07-24 11:50 am (UTC)I read AMM now (damn, I have not the umlauts on my keyboard!) and I liked it a lot - the only thing I was a little unsure about was the ending. It seems horribly unfair that poor Anna should have to suffer horrible pain when the other virgins deflowered over the course of the fic got away so comparatively lightly. I'd have rather seen that final scene be unrealistically perfect, than have all that buildup only to cringe so much that I nearly had to look away.
But apart from that I loved it and I am glad you did the other pairings the way you did, too. *love*