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[arabwel]

sooo... slowly writinbg. And thge guys (and the girl) arewe so going poly, then. Only, have no idea how to do that believeblyuy especially since Juan and Antonin are so determined to be done....

I believe I have the most of things mapped out. oNly, now.. I have to work out Dante's family. I believe he has a mather andseveral younger siblings - am thinking 2 siisters, one 15, one... maybe 13, and a little brother who's 10 or so. (wwas originally thinking 3 sisters and a 5 year old half bro but... dinnae feel like it any more, want there to be less friction or somethuing...)

pnöly, I have no idea how Juan is going to contact the mother and what to say to her when the times comes. Or how the mother is going to react. *le sigh* or if he should contact her as soon as he finds out about Dante being underage and missing, or if he should confront Dante first...

so yeqh, asking you lot again :P

ETA: xzombiexkittenx, did theat godawful crap I sent you make you chomke or what?

Comments

[tiinadoll.livejournal.com]

what I think of Juan's character, I think he would confront Dante first before going to his mother.

about the poly... I think just with keeping in mind that not everyone has to love (and sleep with) everyone makes it a lot easier. Or maybe not. :/ aoghsflj... I'm no help at all. xD;;

augh, I'm a little behind reading this, though. I have some pretty big squick issues about the 'daddy' thing.

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Heyhey, I got the "crap" as you call it, and while you were right, and it needs an assload of editing to get rid of the mary-sueish, fandom references and to tidy up some of the more cliche bits and pieces, it's not that bad. It's not bad at all. I was reading some of it last night (and then I passed out due to exhaustion which is why I didn't email back) and it was a fun read. Fluff, utter fluff, because of the things that need to be cleaned up, but I didn't hate it.

Juan is going to flip a bitch, or so I'd imagine, since he's all "underage what?!" but I figure he'd also talk it out with Dante first before doing anything involving the mother. And having him talk it out might clear up in your head what you want to happen...

BTW- New TTGB is up.