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[arabwel]

sooo... slowly writinbg. And thge guys (and the girl) arewe so going poly, then. Only, have no idea how to do that believeblyuy especially since Juan and Antonin are so determined to be done....

I believe I have the most of things mapped out. oNly, now.. I have to work out Dante's family. I believe he has a mather andseveral younger siblings - am thinking 2 siisters, one 15, one... maybe 13, and a little brother who's 10 or so. (wwas originally thinking 3 sisters and a 5 year old half bro but... dinnae feel like it any more, want there to be less friction or somethuing...)

pnöly, I have no idea how Juan is going to contact the mother and what to say to her when the times comes. Or how the mother is going to react. *le sigh* or if he should contact her as soon as he finds out about Dante being underage and missing, or if he should confront Dante first...

so yeqh, asking you lot again :P

ETA: xzombiexkittenx, did theat godawful crap I sent you make you chomke or what?

Comments

[tiinadoll.livejournal.com]

what I think of Juan's character, I think he would confront Dante first before going to his mother.

about the poly... I think just with keeping in mind that not everyone has to love (and sleep with) everyone makes it a lot easier. Or maybe not. :/ aoghsflj... I'm no help at all. xD;;

augh, I'm a little behind reading this, though. I have some pretty big squick issues about the 'daddy' thing.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that is preytty much waht i thought, too.... just was not sure if his sense of duty would override his need to find out why Dante lied...

I originally intended this to be a nice, uncomplicated 2-couples type of thing. And then the charactwers told me they intend to go poly _ and I went slightly "wtf" but finally acquiesed to their requests.. mostly because, well, this already is nothing but smut....

*hugggles*

Yeah., the Daddy thing is pretty squuickworthy to a lot of folks; to me, it is... salmost therapeiutic, which probably says a lot about me 0_o

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Heyhey, I got the "crap" as you call it, and while you were right, and it needs an assload of editing to get rid of the mary-sueish, fandom references and to tidy up some of the more cliche bits and pieces, it's not that bad. It's not bad at all. I was reading some of it last night (and then I passed out due to exhaustion which is why I didn't email back) and it was a fun read. Fluff, utter fluff, because of the things that need to be cleaned up, but I didn't hate it.

Juan is going to flip a bitch, or so I'd imagine, since he's all "underage what?!" but I figure he'd also talk it out with Dante first before doing anything involving the mother. And having him talk it out might clear up in your head what you want to happen...

BTW- New TTGB is up.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

wheeew, am glad ythat you don't hate it. it was rtather fun to write, at its time, and is not going to be edited - it is going to be totally rewrritten, most likely altenating diarty bits with third person...

J7uan definitely is... poor Dante. Why do I foresee Dante being sent to his room and there beinfgfg much crying and Juan almost headdesking?

the mother, I wish I could get myself bette to jknow, How are you supposed to react when you find out that your troubled runaway on-a-fast-track-yto-jail son who was oloud, obnoxious and prone to getting into a lot of shit is now.. somewhat docile and living with anolder man? *le sigh*

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Depends on what kind of mother it is. I mean, if it was me, Juan would be in for one HELL of an interrogation session, but then I'd be all like "Well, as long as my son is happy, getting an education, and not living on the streets...fuck it, I'm good." If she's at all conservative or not understanding then more bitch flipping is going to occur.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

I reallyhave no idea aboyut what sot of a person Dante's mother is. I know she is a widowm works in a jobt hat is enough to clothe and feecd 4 jkids, (okay, 3 now that dante's been gone fore 2 months) and did file a missing persons reprort when dante took off. And she is Italian/Venetian by heritage... so, I really have no idea ywt. *suiigh* I think there is definitely going to be an interrogation....

and why am i tempoted to make her to be an year younger than Juan? Would make her 34 now and having been 17 when dante was born...

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

ouch. That really does put a whole new spin on dating someone old enough to be your father. >_<

She sounds nice enough...but I think she's going to need a lot of persuasion that Juan isn't just some kind of pervert.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

what can i say, I like being evil.... (iirc, it is not mentuoned int he bits of DA I have posted, but Angel is also an yeart older than beth's father... :P)

Yeah, definitely a lot of reassuance. Just not sure how Juan is going to manage that because technically he IS a pervert to most people, because he is fucking a teenager, smacking said teenager around, and there s the whole sqiuicklicious Daddy business involved....

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Well...yeah. But would you tell your lover's mom that, even IF you were close in age? Highly unlikely. That, and they fall in love, don't they? I'm not going to get all gushy and say that love conquers all, but at least it's more than "I really like young boys to smack around" and more like "I like THIS young boy because he's Dante and I like Dante. The fact that he's young and I get to smack him around is an added bonus."

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

e is deifnitely not going to tell that to her but she most likely is going to suspect.. he will, most likely, try to pull the "err eminds me of myself at that age" card but for some reason, I think Mama Bover is not going to buy it....

besides, Dante will most likely still be bruised.

And yeah, it is definitely Juan liking Dante for the sake of Dante being Dante, the whole cute hot and willing to be fucked and smacked around is just that, bonus... I don't see love confessions anytime soon, but I think i can time them for Christmas ina very gushy way (that woould be aboyut, um., in little over 2 months in booktime)

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

Um.
besides, Dante will most likely still be bruised.
That's hot.

"Reminds him of me at that age," is kind of weird. That's more guardial/paternal than a good explanation as to why you'd be having sex with someone half your age.

[arabwel.livejournal.com]

*giggle* am glad you think so.

And I think Juan would at first try to keep Dante's mom in the dark about the whole fucking-Dante's-brains-out thing but end up spilling the beans, at least to some extent...