Heyhey, I got the "crap" as you call it, and while you were right, and it needs an assload of editing to get rid of the mary-sueish, fandom references and to tidy up some of the more cliche bits and pieces, it's not that bad. It's not bad at all. I was reading some of it last night (and then I passed out due to exhaustion which is why I didn't email back) and it was a fun read. Fluff, utter fluff, because of the things that need to be cleaned up, but I didn't hate it.

Juan is going to flip a bitch, or so I'd imagine, since he's all "underage what?!" but I figure he'd also talk it out with Dante first before doing anything involving the mother. And having him talk it out might clear up in your head what you want to happen...

BTW- New TTGB is up.